Black Ghost

6/10 *shrugs* it's okay. MM

Hey there! Nice story you have here. The think I enjoyed the most was your voice, it seemed to flow especially well when I was reading. As for the story, ...

It's cool, but the links in the Writer's Market don't seem to work. *shrugs* Maybe it's just me or something... MM

Hey! It's funny, I think you have one of the longest usernames on the site! That's pretty cool... Anyway, welcome, and don't hesitate to ask for help from me or ...

Like Sam said, I'm much more in love with the actual plot and characters than what comes out in writing. But as for hating what I write, I wouldn't go ...

Hey Claudette! Very awesome story in my opinion. :wink: I only found a few typos and things, since it's very well written. He shouted, “I didn’t do it.” The driver ...

‘I’m done with helping you’re kind,’ he finished bitterly. Typo there. Should be your . That's about the only thing I found, you edit very well. :) On the story ...

Hmm...not sure, really. I don't really get any image from it, and I can't tell whether or not it's in a foreign language. *Ponders* I would probably flip through it ...

What I was trying to get across here is that te mother is mentally ill (specifically bipolar), but many bipolar people do not think that there's anything wrong with them. ...

Hey Phorcys, I finally got around to critting this. :lol: So! Hope this helps somewhat. :P Slizik smiled paternally while he looked around the corridor. Prime and Dawson Limited was ...

Hey, Areida! :D Not only is this an awesome example of Quiet Horror, it's a great piece of fiction in any sense. The way that you incorporate all the things ...

9/10 I like it :P

:smt119 Hehe, I like this one!

Hey Jiggity! Here's one-half of your critique. Nice piece by the way. :P I said I would give an "in-depth" critique, so I thought breaking it up would help accomplish ...

I think it's...rubbing it's head? *ponders* But very cool smilies. Thanks Nate! MM